“ Hospital”
AAAAAAAAHH! You are probably thinking that this is a weird story that does not end with a happy ending, but let me show you what really happens in this crazy story of mine. It all starts with my friend Zach yelling at me to hurry up. “Mike! Hurry up we have to leave in a minute! If you don’t hurry up I’m going to leave with out you!” “Alright,” I yelled back, “I just need to get my tooth brush then I’m done. Once he got everything packed Zach, Mariah, and him got into the car and started driving. After driving for a couple of hours on the road Mike restlessly asked, “Zack are you sure you know were you are going?” “Yes, of course I know where we’re going. We’re going the right ……… WATCH OUT!” Zach jerked the wheel to the left to and the car went crazy then it finally stopped. Mike breathing hard asked, “Hey, is everyone ok? Did what we hit?” “Oh my gosh, I think it was a girl!!” Mariah screamed. All of a sudden the same girl they thought they hit appeared right in front of the car. “Turn back now!” the girl demanded. Confused, Zach gets out of the car and asks, “What? I mean are you ok? Here, let me take you to a hospital we passed by it about a mile ago.” “No, don’t take me anywhere just leaves me alone…… NOW!” All of a sudden she takes out a gun and points it at herself. “Get near me and I’ll shoot,” the crazy girl says. “Hey, just calm down. Please don’t do something you’ll regret,” Mariah begs. BANGG! The girl shoots herself. “She’s dead! I can’t believe she just shot herself! Come let’s take her to the hospital,” says Mariah. The dump the body into the trunk and drive to the hospital as fast as they could. When they arrived at the hostial it was deserted so they walked up to the front desk and screamed, “We have a girl who just shot herself…….Hello… is anyone here? Can we get some help here please? This is an emergency!” “Hello, my name is Fatima ….. OH! What happen here?” the nurse Fatima asked. “This girl shot herself!” Zach said. The nurse checked the girl’s pulse, “She has a soft pulse this girl is almost dead.” “How can you be so relaxed….this girl is dying.” Fatima looked over at Mike and said, “Young man, don’t use that tone of voice with me.” “So this girl is about to die and you’re taking your time?! What’s wrong with you lady??” Mariah yelled. “Let me take her to Dr. Lambard and you guys can stay right here I’ll be right back,” Fatima said. After a few hours the nurse Fatima comes out and asks Zack to come into the girl’s recovery room. “Umm…. but why do you want me to come?” Zach asks. “The doctor wants to see you,” Fatima says politely. Zach get up and follows Fatima into the room. After a few minutes Mikes and Mariah hears a scream. “Did you hear that Mariah? Mike asks. “Hear what?” Mariah asks confused. “That noise…. it sounded like someone was screaming. What if it’s Zach I’m going in there I can’t wait any longer,” Mike yells. “No! Don’t go am sure Fatima will come out and………. look behind you,” Mariah gasps. “What’s behind me?” Mike asks as he slowly turns. All they hear is the roar of a chainsaw and then blood goes all over the wall. And the rest is to be continued.
Monday, November 13, 2006
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2 comments:
Wow, Doctor Lambard, huh? :)
You have high hopes for me!
I love the story, but I hope the "to be continued " is true; i don't like it when a story drops off.
What do the rest of you think?
I have so many questions so please come up with an ending because i would like to no if the nurse was the one with the chainsaw.
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