Missing Girl?
When people look at pictures, they feel happy from what they have experienced. Sometimes you just want cuddle by the fire and listen to you grandmas stories while you like the cookie dough spoon. But in other cases it could be different. When you look at some pictures, they can make you break down in tears because you simply feel dreadful that such happiness had to end.
‘Here’s the girl’ inspector Duke replied to the chief
‘So threes no evidence on the girl’ asked the chief
‘Well we only found a red ribbon in the front seat of the car crash and a picture that I found in the glove compartment of which it looks like the girl and the mom on Halloween’ replied Duke
‘So, so is there any information on the mom of the child’ asked the chief
‘Well, the mom has been hospitalized and the girl has just gone missing, its like she just puffed right in thin air.’ replied Duke
‘Great detective work’ compliment the chief, ’Your dismissed
1 Year Later:
Two weeks after the car crash, the mother had died from what they think is loss of blood. But the women’s body had no cuts or bruises, she just collapsed right then and there on the scene. Her daughter still remain missing, but there isn’t much hope anymore. The chances are very slim for a 4-year old girl to survive on her own for over a year. Nobody knows what really happened to her and nobody is sure about the mothers death.
When the nurses were taking the cold, lifeless body out of the room, one of them found a red ribbon around the mothers neck tied rather tightly. When the nurse unties it, the skin under it was a blue circle from the loss of circulation. When she made sure the ribbon was off completely, she hears a loud squeaky scream. Suddenly she couldn’t breathe! As she gasped for air, she tumbled to the ground faster then a row of dominoes do. You can say that that was the end of her.
When the doctor came to see what was talking the nurse so long he dropped his clipboard to the floor and ran to aid the nurse that had looked death straight in the eye, and it looked like death won the battle. The doctor found something very unusual around the nurses neck, a red ribbon.
When Duke came to investigate the scene, surly the red ribbon wasn’t unfamiliar to him. He pulled out the picture that he found in the car crash of the girl and her mom from a year ago, in the picture, they looked so happy, but when he took just one glance, tears flowed down his cheeks like fierce rivers. He finally cried out ‘Apparently, the missing girl was never missing, she was here with us all along.
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6 comments:
This is good. I think you have a really strong begining.
I liked that you used alot of detail and that the story was just a regular investigation in the beginning of the story and ended up to be a ghost story.
very strong beginning...i enjoyed it a lot. Good use of detail
whoa thats freaky!
good detail!!!
I think the begining of the story was really good and it had a lot of detail.
i liked the beggining and the detail you used about pictures and wanting to curl up by the fire liking the cookie dough spoon.but i dint get the ending where he said the girl was with us all along i think you should explain how
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