"The Relentless Robot"
In the cold black heart of a town called Ckronya lies an abandoned warehouse made of rusty steel. In fact, this warehouse was so dirty on the outside that not even a roach would dare to step ten yards close to it, but of course that was only the outside. Inside was actually very clean. Dr. Craw, the owner of the warehouse, was a very complicated scientist. He was the only man in town who hated tourist. He hated them so much that he decided to put his intelligence to work.
Everyday when Jimmy came home from school he would always hear his mom and dad arguing, that’s if his dad was home. It was always “Carl why didn’t you do this and that”, or “Michelle why isn’t there no more soda in fridge”. It was always the same thing day after day. Jimmy wished that on day it would end, but soon he would learn be careful what you wished for.
Michelle Reed and Carl Reed had three kids together, Liz, Bert, and Jimmy. Mike, Jimmy best friend, has been living with the Reed’s since he was eleven when his mom died. Occasionally Carl would go out of town and come back on the weekends which he did nothing but sit in the couch and drink Pepsi all day long. Well on this weekend Carl had to stay at work on the weekend, so that he can finish building the house on time. That was the weekend when everything changed.
Welding and Drilling were the only sounds in the old warehouse as Dr. Craw furiously worked on a robot not to kill, but brutally touture the tourist so they run out of town as soon as they walk in. It was called Dave. Carl was coming back from work late Sunday night. He was planning to go fishing with the boys Monday and return to work Tuesday. On his way to his house he stopped by the 6/10 Kwik Stop owner. Dave saw him in there and tried to torture him but it didn’t work. So he decided just to kill him. Dave soon discovered all humans were like that so, instead of torture he would kill them. Dave got very annoyed at this so he thought of a new plan.
Bert was walking home from school when he saw Jimmy and Mike walking the other way, so he decided to walk with them. Dave saw them walking home so he decided to kill them. Dr. Craw only equipped him with knives on his hands to scare people away, so that’s all he had to use. First Dave started on Jimmy he took his left hand and chop his head off. Bert and Mike were so scared that they ran off yelling "aaaaaaaahhhhhh" . Dave thought there would be no reason why he should go after it them when he still has one. As the knives were bitting through Jimmy's head it was like a chef dicing onions. Next was the rest of the body. He cut Jimmy right down the middle and took his heart out and squeezed it in his hand so much it was no longer a muscle it was pure liquid. He did the same for the rest muscles and organs. The skin went right into the blender and kept it in a jar in the warehouse were Dr. Craw could not discover it. He buried the bones in the ground in the back of the warehouse.
Dave saw a human size blender that Dr. Craw was working on and decided to put it to work so that same night Dave sat out to look for Bert and Mike and blended them together and dumb the liquid into the sewer. By then the news had came out. When Dr. Craw found this out he spoke to Dave. Dave tried to reason with him so he told Dr. Craw that the people in town liked tourist so much that they were trying to stop him. Knowing that Dr. Craw went on the journey to kill everyone one else in the town. Until there was only three people left to kill. So, Dave and Dr. Craw figured out a way that they can kill three birds with one stone. Dr. Craw calls a town meeting with the last three existing people in town, Michelle, Liz, and Lambard the 6/10 Kwik Stop. While trying to discuss how to defeat the robot, here comes Dave. In his hands a big powerful fan. Dave plugs it in and signals Dr. Craw. He handcuffs himself to a window and Dave turns on the fan. The fan unfortunately doesn’t blow air. It sucks air, powerful air as it drags the citizens shredding them to pieces one by one it was like blending carrots. Dave and Dr. Craw went to finish the mission of defeating humans who liked tourist.
Monday, November 06, 2006
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4 comments:
I really like your hook. It explains alot & has alot of detail :]
I really like it but it's really nasty and disgusting. But it also has agreat hook.
i loved that every paragragh had a hook
i couldnt stop reading it even if i tried :]
it was a great story I loved it and it was pretty interesting but how did you come up with all of the gory details. Im still scared I think I need to check my neighborhood for evil robots named Dave. I really love this story.
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