SCARY STORY
It was a cold and dark night and the moon was covered with black smog. My friends and I have just finished the movie “Chainsaw massacre”. It was a scary movie. Know me Kris, Corin and matt are going to Kris’s house to hangout and chill.
It is 10:30 and we are walking to Kris’s house. There is a dark narrow walkway that connects on side of the neighborhood to the other. Matt and Kris live on the opposite sides on the neighborhoods. Were walking, walking, and walking. All of the sudden we start hearing chainsaws. We look back and see a mysterious black figure holding an object. We all run for our lives. We stop running and see that matt is missing. We are horrified. I think its just a joke or prank.
Now we are brisk walking and really want to get to Kris’s house. Boom! A giant rock just flew out of the air and hit Corin in the head. He is gushing blood and we don’t know what to do. Me and Kris dragged Corin and ran as fast as we can to the house. There was a trail of blood on the street and it’s not Corin’s. Kris feels something touch his leg. He looks down and sees matt’s body chopped up in pieces. Now Me Kris and Corin are speeding down the street. We are 2 turns away from the house. A mysterious person pulls Corin into a bush and starts… Err, Err, Chi, Chi, Chi. We both no that is the sound of a chainsaw.
We finally arrive home and run upstairs and watch something to get everything off our mind.
12 comments:
i think that the ending should have more action and be more real cause if 3 of my friends died i wouldnt watch a movie to take my mind of it.
The ending just shouldnt end with you guys watching a movie to get your minds off of everything it should be telling what happened to your friend and like you guys being scared to ever go back outside during the nightt :]
I liked the story but you needed more action and i would go back and look for them. i woulnt watch a movie to get it of my mind
i think this could of been alot better if your didn't cut it off so short. I also think you should of put more action into it. and i also wouldn't watch a movie to get my mind off of what happend
i think you shold make a better ending maybe tell who did all of this.
I would definitaly change the ending and make a little bit more scary like if think you will be next or something that has action but the rest of the story was very good.
I would definitaly change the ending and make a little bit more scary like if think you will be next or something that has action but the rest of the story was very good.
I think the story was really good but you should change the ending.
The story ended to fastly you should continue it. Continue the suspends.
I think you were taking parts of movie and putting them together, also make it longer,not only that but why would you watch a movie to take you mind off of it?
it was a grreat story but i don't think you guys should watch a movie to get your mind off of it.
i was ok but i think it can be better by puting more action
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