SCARY STORY
It was a cold and dark night and the moon was covered with black smog. My friends and I have just finished the movue "chainsaw massacre". It was a scary movie. Now me, Kris, Corin, and matt are going to Kris's house to hangout and chill.
It is 10:30 and we are walking to Kris's house. There is a dark narrow walkway that connects on side of the nieghborhood to the other. matt and Kris live on opposite sides of the nieghborhood. Were walking,walking and walking. All of a sudden we start hearing chainsaws. We look back and see a mysterious black figureholding an object. We all run for our lives. We stop running and see that Matt is missing. We are horrified. I think its just a joke or a prank.
Now we are brisk walking and really want to get to Kris's house. BOOM!!! a giant rock just flew out of the air and hit Corin in the head. he is gushing blood and we don't know what to do. Me and Kris dragged corin and ran as fast as we could to the house. There is a trail of blood and it's not Corin's. Kris feels somehting touch his leg. He looks down and sees Matt's body choped up into pieces. Now me and kris and corin are speeding down the street. We are as fast as race cars and we are two turns away from the house. A mysterious person pulls Corin into a bush and starts ... ERR ERR CHI CHI CHI. We both know that is the sound of a chainsaw.
We finally arrive home and run upstairs and call 911. And to this day they are still looking for the killer. For as me and you know the killer could be living in YOUR nieghborhood. Beware you will be the next target.
It was a cold and dark night and the moon was covered with black smog. My friends and I have just finished the movue "chainsaw massacre". It was a scary movie. Now me, Kris, Corin, and matt are going to Kris's house to hangout and chill.
It is 10:30 and we are walking to Kris's house. There is a dark narrow walkway that connects on side of the nieghborhood to the other. matt and Kris live on opposite sides of the nieghborhood. Were walking,walking and walking. All of a sudden we start hearing chainsaws. We look back and see a mysterious black figureholding an object. We all run for our lives. We stop running and see that Matt is missing. We are horrified. I think its just a joke or a prank.
Now we are brisk walking and really want to get to Kris's house. BOOM!!! a giant rock just flew out of the air and hit Corin in the head. he is gushing blood and we don't know what to do. Me and Kris dragged corin and ran as fast as we could to the house. There is a trail of blood and it's not Corin's. Kris feels somehting touch his leg. He looks down and sees Matt's body choped up into pieces. Now me and kris and corin are speeding down the street. We are as fast as race cars and we are two turns away from the house. A mysterious person pulls Corin into a bush and starts ... ERR ERR CHI CHI CHI. We both know that is the sound of a chainsaw.
We finally arrive home and run upstairs and call 911. And to this day they are still looking for the killer. For as me and you know the killer could be living in YOUR nieghborhood. Beware you will be the next target.
5 comments:
Your story was sooo scary. I was shaking in my socks!you used alot of good detail. very good story.
i like the ending alot better its more realistic and it leaves you in suspense and i like how you ended it by saying the killer could be in your neighboorhood
I really like the ending it keeps the eader thinking also it is really scary.
This story had a way better ending then the last one and it was also scary. You should edit the story and put indents in it because i kind of got a little lost when i was reading it!
I like the ending. your story is scary. It makes me even more scared of the chainsaw massacre!Great story.
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