Wednesday, November 08, 2006

There was this man, not a regular man. He was called the Carver, He would carve things on people who cross his path and taste there blood. The begin Of the terror. Mike and Amanda were in the red mustang and the warm breeze filled the car and went though Amanda’s shinny blond hair. Mike had long brown dark hair was breezing though his hair to. His arm was across Amanda’s shoulder. Mike pressed the black F.M. radio and listen to the country music from back home in Louisiana. Suddenly there was a little girl in the middle of the street. Mike turned the wheel instantly. They felt like there heart was about to fall out at that moment. The car rolled down the steep hill as there mind went complete blank not knowing what’s going on. The car stop in a big thump. The car was upside down and in bad condition. Mike took off his seat belt and crawled out the car gasping for air. Mike finally got to catch his breath "Amanda are you okay" Mike said in a concern voice. "Yeah I’m fine" Amanda said. They looked around to see if they can find someone to help them."HELP!" Amanda said.
" What happened why you crash" Amanda said. " I saw this little girl in the street" Mike said. A White truck drove by. They ran up the hill yelling out "HELP!" . The truck stop instantly and a man stepped out the truck, he had brown dirty boots, White and red stripes on his T-shirt. He had wore out jeans . He had a dirty red hat on to. " Sir ,we need help please" Amanda said. The man fell down instantly. There was a knife in his head. "Oh my god! Is he okay" Amanda said in a panic voice. Mike ran and slide on the rough rocky road " He’s dead" Mike said. Amanda looked like she just had a green lime. Amanda grabbed her cell phone out of her pocket. She presses the black buttons in such panic. Nine one, one she dialed, A Dial tone came on. Amanda looked at her signal on her cell realizing that its low. Mike went through the mans pants All he found was an ID it had a bad odor it had flies on it and had a little blood .Mike used his green shirt to clean it off to see the face clearly. It was a 21 year old women ID. "Why would this guy have a woman ID"Mike said. " I have no clue but I just want to get out of here" Amanda said. Mike went into the white truck and put his hand on the car key trying to start the truck. "Come on, Come on" Mike said while trying to start the engine. Mike stepped out of the truck trying to look around to see if could figure out how to get out of the situation. A white van was coming around the corner. Mike ran in the middle of the road and wave his arms up and down. The white van started to accelerate faster and faster. Suddenly Mike felt a force and pressure hitting his body harshly. The van passes driving away. "Mike!, Mike!" Amanda yelled in panic. Mike was on the rocky, rough, road lying there in pain. Thinking that the van just ran him over. His legs were mostly off and was bleeding badly. The sky just turned gray out of nowhere. " I have to get you help" Amanda said. She saw a rest stop right by. " That wasn’t there before" Thinking in her head. She decided to drag him there so she can clean him up a bit. Mike was in terrible pain pleading her to stop dragging him. But Amanda refuse she was to busy trying to get him to the rest stop. She reached there and kicked down the door. Amanda dragged him into the bathroom. " Don’t worry you will be okay" Amanda said. Amanda ripped a piece of her purple blouse off. She took it and turned on the sink handle She took the piece of the blouse and wet it with water. She bended over and took the wet blouse and cleaned the blood on Mike foot. " What are we going to do" Mike said. Amanda didn’t answer she was to busy cleaning his wound. Another white truck for some reason drove by but this time it entered the parking lot. Amanda was in a panic attack trying to find away to escape.
She found a way but it was only an escape that only she could go threw. " Go leave try to escape" Mike said. " I can’t leave you here almost running out of blood" Amanda said. She heard the man step out of the truck. Amanda felt in panic attack. The man had a bucket he put his hand thought the small tiny window and started to pour gasoline on the floor. Amanda dragged Mike away from the gasoline that was being poured out. " He is trying to burn us out of here" Mike said. " I can’t just leave you hear" Amanda said . The man took a match a light it up on the fire box. " You must go NOW!"Mike said. Amanda just had a little tear on her cheek and climbed on the toilet. To jump up into the escape. The man dropped the match and the fire shoot up instantly . Amanda reach on top of the roof and jumped off it. Landing into the grass in pressure on her feet. The building blew up. The fire shoot up like rockets bursting in air. Amanda tried hiding behind the tress next to her. Because the man was going towards her direction looking for her. The man had an axe in his hand. He use force and swung the axe like a baseball trying to hit home run. Amanda felt instant pressure in her chest. Just realizing that the axe was on her shoulder. The man took a dirty old knife out of his pocket. He Saw that she was pin down on the floor bleeding in pain. He took his knife and wrote his name Carver on her left thigh. He took his fingers and tasted her blood. She had died a terrible death but his legend will pass on for years.

6 comments:

jsd said...

wow!!!

This is good, and i REALLY like your begingin and endingg. =]

and it is scary too

MJV said...

this is quite swell. It seemed that it is very possible for a killer guy to carve his name on you which made it scary!

Anonymous said...

Ahhhhhhhh! Its scary to see a guy carve his name in you.

Anonymous said...

Oh my gosh!!!

Really good story, also really scary!


Nice ending and begining.

Anonymous said...

Oh my gosh!!!

Really good story, also really scary!


Nice ending and begining.

Anonymous said...

the beging was the best part i can relly fell the car going out of contoral